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critique KH

Sun Jun 11, 2006, 5:48 PM
Dear Diary,

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i need you're critique of this Kingdom Hearts
the assignment was to strip all sound from a clip & then manually reapply all sound that you have found & if needed , record voices for it.Sora is voiced by & Kairi is voiced by me.please tell my if sounds are too loud or soft or if anything sounds off or if some sounds that should be audible are missing.this is for my final so i REALLY need your feedback , plz n____n thnx y'all!

PSuhmmm , youtube uploaded it funny so the sounds are slightly offbeat like a bad foriegn dub.don't worry , in the original it's synched up :D

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:iconmorriganaixa:
er...it says it isn't available. Spose I'll wait a few minutes.
:iconmorriganaixa:
Awesome job on the noises! That water was reeeally good. The voices were really quiet....I turned my speakers up and I could still barely hear some of them. But everything else was fantabulously good.
:iconhaldinn-og-haldarinn:
I think that the voices need to be much louder, especially Kairi's when she's shouting at/calling to Sora. I also feel that you should do Kairi's voice a little higher, I mean, she's a little girl, and she sounds older than her age at the moment. Also, the "whoa" that Sora says about the sea/wave, that seems a little out of place. So maybe it could be like "Huh?" or "Uh?" Or just taken out. I really loved the part when the M83 comes in, I kept waiting to hear it and I was like "WHOA, that was COOL!" But about that part, it sounds a little awkward to me when you slow it down, because it sounds distorted... maybe you should just... quiet it down gradually? (However, Bekka thinks it sounds fine, so it might be me being picky).

Its pretty good overall. Good job!

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"I died! I didn't even get shopped at--I mean shot at!"
-Me, playing 007
:iconlupidog:
Mainly the voices were too quiet. The sounds were really interesting and I was very intrigued (I've not played the game, so I don't know what the original was like). And your giggle was the cutest thing ever~!! =) but yeah, too quiet compared to the sound effects.
:iconpukegreenshoes:
if you look at Sora's lips movement , he's mouthing "whoa".so there.
the voices can't be louder , so that means i need to make all the other sounds softer.
i could only work with that song if i distorted it.the idea is that "whoa something MAGICAL is happening & oh crap i'm all alone again".
Kairi's like 12.i think i sounded fine.eight year olds do not have boobies , Em.
:iconpukegreenshoes:
that's because we recorded them too quiet apparantly (something to do with the MBOX settings).so i have to quiet everything else to make the voices sound louder.which i did a great deal , but it's so tedius trying to equally lower the volume on every effing thing else...ugh..maybe there's a way to "nest" them?anyhoo , i'm not redoing the voices.it's too anal to redo them now. :/
:iconpukegreenshoes:
noted.i will lower the volume on surounding sounds (the voices volumes are already at their peak nn;;) & thnx *blush* it's hard to giggle on command without sounding utterly DUMB 8 8
:iconmorriganaixa:
It's alright, just make sure they've got a subwoofer in the room when you play that, cause the base is AWESOME.

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